mountain tops are climbed
by individuals who
seek heights to look down
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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the valley in the shaddow
becomes their labour's reward
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much truth in there
tanka:
"yet their echoes go unheard
a breeze sets, tracks lost in snow" -
hmmm... Very interesting write you have here... I like the difference of this haiku... Inner thought.
Wonderful job!
Best of luck in your contest
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love it
love it for the tanka:"there goes the evoke of the
climb back down to reality" Kendhal22 -
iron wills carrying them
to the throne of the heavens
I like the sort of bluntness to this haiku. Well written, and good luck!
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a very focused haiku
tanka:
from up here the world looks small
the town would fit my pocket -
A perfect formed haiku. I like the subject of your haiku. Finally the answer as to why people climb mountains...lol Good luck.
Kelli -
Very nice Haiku. We all should reach for the top. Best of luck in the contest.
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