earth rejoice
wears new skirt
model unparallel
Author notes
each season brings new dress to earth
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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her glamour without excess
beauty without vanity
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lol, i really like this, lovely take on the seasons, and good luck. take care
stephanie
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each new bloom is pieced together
creating a shawl for warmth
lol I tried their's your tanka response from me Good luck in the contest Brother. Nice Haiku
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lovely spring haiku
tanka:
new clothes for each new season
and they recycle themselves! -
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very true!
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Very nice.
satiny soft lips align
the longs of l'attitude
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I like your metaphor for the change of season. Very nice. A good haiku. Good luck to you in the contest.
Kelli -
wonderful imagery here...you are good at haikus, they are so practical in a way..All the best!
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