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Till the end {about how I want to live on}

My body may be weak
But my soul is strong
Threw my friends I shall live on
If I die its mine to pay

But threw my friends I live to fight another day
If I live my debt is paid
So forget who I was
And know who I am

I will rise again
Knowing I have a true friend
My soul will live on forever never to die
My body in the ground it shall lie

I will be back once again
To fight till the very end

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  • Montey
    November 26
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    A very strong and expressive poem.Reminds me of the dignity and strength my dad had when he was told he had a terminal illness.Liked the lines "My body may be weak but my soul is strong"Montey


  • love tank x
    April 26, 2008

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    One thing I really love about your poetry is how it tends to be positive and uplifting. It always leaves me feeling hopeful.

    week --> should be "weak"
    threw --> should be "through"
    knowinf --> should be "knowing"

    Good job! ♥