May dandelion
yellow fades white and withered
Make a wish and blow!
Author notes
This is a haiku i wrote for a haiku contest. The first haiku i ever wrote was about a dandelion. but when i first thought about what i wanted to write this was the concept i was looking for. but I wrote something else.
credit pic**unknown google.search.image
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Whooh! I love dandelions! I've always wanted to take a picture like that... so beautiful.. Nice Haiku too-- wonderfully written
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love it
love this one
Tanka;;
"wishes travel in the wind
blown from parting of two lips" -
love it
love it, for the tanka:"I wish may, I wish maynot
let the blossoms spread in flight" Kendhal22 -
awww wow, i adore this, its soooo cute ^_^
lovely job and good luck
hehehe now im going to try a tanka
lol
"Hopes release in spreading seeds,
pushing airs' wish through blossoms"
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wow..i think this is beautiful! thanx for the tanka for my poem
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well thank you (im new to it all 0.o ) lol
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I love dandelion clocks, nice haiku
tanka :
time goes flying by on wind
nothing can stop the clocks now -
ah simple pleasures! nice way of capturing it!
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