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Insignificance

The ant’s life and family under your shoe.
The unclaimed dead in the common grave.
A tree falling in the wilderness with no one to see or hear.
A life lived thoughtlessly.
The details of a project too high to be seen.
Letters written and never sent.
The dust under the couch.
Living creatures on the moon.


Insignificance, like its alternative
is determined by the
Writer and the reader.

The ant,
the mother,
the raccoon,
the person,
the manager,
the author,
the housecleaner
and God
don’t see the insignificance.

Author notes

A contest entry for:
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by Nakatrea 600 points, ends April 26

This poem is for Option 4. I picked this prompt because the title selection seemed significant.

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  • Nakatrea
    April 26, 2008

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    Wow I'm really impressed! I like how you interpreted the title option and love your authors note. I am going to have so much trouble judging this contest but Good job and good luck


    • CurtimusMaximus
      April 26, 2008
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      Thank you!

      Your contest was a fun one to be a part of! I'm glad I got in time to get the entry in.