Pavilion above and below
hint towards hazed paths,
an unclear destination,
devoid of mirth,
grit your heart
to tred on.
Author notes
CARNEY CLOWN
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A contest entry
- Carnival Creeper - 20/20 by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended May 9, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS - Come and see!!!! PW ARE ALLOWED - by mystic-angel.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice dark write. So much said in so few words. Well written. Thanks for your entry. Good luck.
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Thank you...have a nice day!
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Interesting
A lot said in so few words and a very powerful piece.
Best of luck, and thank you for taking your time in an entry into my contest, it is truly appreciated. -
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You are welcome!
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eeekkk that pic freaks me out!!! lol
Love what you did with it tho... a sense of foreboding in it!
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Exactly ..I tried to capture that feeling..I don't do dark writes often....
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That's quite the picture. Nicely done. Best wishes to you in the contest.
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Definitely a carnival creeper. Very well written. I hope it does well in the contest. Good luck to you.
Kelli
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