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Bridges of my heart

There are many path's to walk
when crossing the heart
Sometimes you don't know where you end
Others the mystery is where you start

Friends, Lovers, Enemies, and Family
All cross the bridges from the start
And tho you may get lost in there
Once on the bridges you may never depart.

Some cross the lakes, rivers, and oceans
Caused by those that hurt you before
Some cross planes and valleys of emotions
Leaving their imprints for others to bore

Through the Forest of depression
Drowning in your sea of thought
Playing in your field of Dreams
Or swimming in the center of your heart.

Everyone one is there from day 1 too 102
No one ever finishes traveling the bridges
Till they are done with you

Some jump off in the middle of the track
Some stay till they find the end
Some rip them selves out
Putting a new canyon or Ocean in.

Adding scenery for the next person
that enters no matter where it be
So remember to take your time
and travel your bridges slow

Don't let others fall to the depths
that were not there before

Build your bridges carefully
So that your friends wont stray
And try to keep your lovers
Out of each others way

Don't put your family to close to your friends
Your lovers should stay in-between
and never mix your lovers and friends
To much construction makes a bridge weak

So in the end the point is clear
Set a path from far to near
Don't keep people to far away
But allow a long enough bridge for you to play

And don't put someone on an old track
Just cause they act like someone before
Let the bridge build on its own
Making memories like before

Author notes

not my best on the spot but it has alot to do with what is going on in my life right now

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  • Unsigned gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    wonderful write
    Well done poet

    Best luck

    Simon