Intrigue me.
What's that stare?
Oh.
I guess it's not for me.
My mistake.
Just give a smile,
if only for
a while.
how horribly humiliating.
Don't you know? I suppose you do.
I suppose you just ignore it...
...choose to...
i love you.
I'm sorry, did I just blurt that out?
I'm joking, don't mind me--
don't mind this agony..
Did I say agony? I meant, Antigone...
what a tale was hers.
What's that? Oh. yes. I understand.
If you must go, then you must go,
I won't force you to stay.
Please tell me what you think
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The agony is real, and I feel it - mortifyingly real.
Your good humor saves the piece from melodrama, and raises its station to something universal - empathetic, even.
This is art.
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thanks
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I love the style of your writing. It's very well done.
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