I look for you
But I fall to my knees
Gentle breath
Someone help me please
I can't find the strength
To get up and walk
I've fallen to hell
With everyone's talk
Someone please stop them
They're taking over my mind
I'm trapped in the darkness
They're all but kind
What can I do
Please rescue me
The shadow is here
It now consume's me
What's left in this life
This blackened hole
What's left for my body
This shadowed soul
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice but I believe there is more to this twisted story of yours...
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I liked a lot of the lines. This poem also had a very nice flow. My favorite verse would have to be the last one. Excellent write.
XXCrimsonRaineXX -
Very deep and dark. Nicely written.
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