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Gold - Haiku 5-7-5
ghostly images
fresh scents of spring embedded
white sheets on the line
For Tanka's
marlene47
each wind gust reminding her
how long now they are apart
sheltered
winded memories exhumed
without a wasted breath
pania
winter spirits now set free
shadows replaced by the sun
Jonathon Wilkins
Come with me, my lovely lady
for the spring does come for us all
In a list
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very good haiku.
sheets of the line on a spring night: good clear image.
the ku is just right
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Very nice! I really love your haiku!
Wonderful job.... It really has a nice touch to it... And vivid images
Best of luck in your contest 
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WoW!
The first entry in this contest!
I really like how this begins!
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wow!
love ur ku. here my tanka lines:"awaken memory brushed,
caressing of yesterday"
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awwww thats beautiful, wonderful write and good luck
take care
stephanie
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Nice image Schnookums, Laundry on the line, yep, and as long as you keep doin that laundry, I'll keep feedin ya, hehe. just kidding.
great job baby.
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Nicely penned, haven't written a haiku in ages. Love this one! Good luck in the contest
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first, my tanka...
Come with me, my lovely lady
for the spring does come for us all
nice little haiku!
i usually don't write haiku, too long winded i guess!
good luck in the contest
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
Excellent
What a great haiku. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I love this haiku.
tanka :
winter spirits now set free
shadows replaced by the sun -
for a tanka:
each wind gust reminding her
how long now they are apart
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winded memmories exumed
without a wasted breath -
Very thought invoking...
This is my kind of Haiku.
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Spooky!
Sounds like something out of a horror film. Nice work, cuz.
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Oh, this is really nice. I love the imagery in this haiku. Very well crafted. I hope it does well in the contest.
Kelli -
Lots of memories for me in this - a welcoming haunting.
Marlene -
Beautiful...love the image here..All the best!
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Well done, sister. I like lots. Write on and good luck in the contest. One.
Dez
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Nicely done!
Aahh, I can smell that spring is in the air. Very eloquent.
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Well done
well done, while I do not do Haiku, you have really done well
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Gorgeous honey, absolutely gorgeous. The breeze stirs this write, and I smell fresh laundry hanging, very realistic.
Best wishes,
This is good stuff,
Jin
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from out of a parting cloud
the full beam of a rainbow.
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thank you for replying to this excellent haiku and helping to get this contest off the ground!
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