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Gold - Haiku 5-7-5

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Gold - Haiku 5-7-5
ghostly images
fresh scents of spring embedded
white sheets on the line

For Tanka's

marlene47
each wind gust reminding her
how long now they are apart


sheltered
winded memories exhumed
without a wasted breath


pania
winter spirits now set free
shadows replaced by the sun

Jonathon Wilkins
Come with me, my lovely lady
for the spring does come for us all

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  • james119
    June 13

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    very good haiku.
    sheets of the line on a spring night: good clear image.
    the ku is just right

  • Very nice! I really love your haiku!
    Wonderful job.... It really has a nice touch to it... And vivid images
    Best of luck in your contest

  • DogFish silver member
    May 4
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    WoW!

    The first entry in this contest!
    I really like how this begins!

  • kendhal22 gold member
    May 3
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    wow!

    love ur ku. here my tanka lines:"awaken memory brushed,
    caressing of yesterday"
  • awwww thats beautiful, wonderful write and good luck
    take care
    stephanie

  • Nice image Schnookums, Laundry on the line, yep, and as long as you keep doin that laundry, I'll keep feedin ya, hehe. just kidding.
    great job baby.

  • Nicely penned, haven't written a haiku in ages. Love this one! Good luck in the contest

  • first, my tanka...

    Come with me, my lovely lady
    for the spring does come for us all

    nice little haiku!

    i usually don't write haiku, too long winded i guess!

    good luck in the contest

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins

  • penman gold member
    April 29
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    Excellent

    What a great haiku. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • pania gold member
    April 28

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    I love this haiku.

    tanka :

    winter spirits now set free
    shadows replaced by the sun

  • marlene47 silver member
    April 27
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    for a tanka:
    each wind gust reminding her
    how long now they are apart

  • sheltered
    April 26
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    winded memmories exumed
    without a wasted breath

  • sheltered
    April 26
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    Very thought invoking...

    This is my kind of Haiku.

  • Spooky!

    Sounds like something out of a horror film. Nice work, cuz.


  • Kelli Marie
    April 26

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    Oh, this is really nice. I love the imagery in this haiku. Very well crafted. I hope it does well in the contest.
    Kelli

  • marlene47 silver member
    April 26
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    Lots of memories for me in this - a welcoming haunting.
    Marlene

  • crimsondew silver member
    April 26
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    Beautiful...love the image here..All the best!


  • secberm
    April 26
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    Well done, sister. I like lots. Write on and good luck in the contest. One.

    Dez


  • isabelwk
    April 26
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    Nicely done!

    Aahh, I can smell that spring is in the air. Very eloquent.

  • SoulWhispher
    April 25
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    Well done

    well done, while I do not do Haiku, you have really done well


  • JinSays gold member
    April 25

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    Gorgeous honey, absolutely gorgeous. The breeze stirs this write, and I smell fresh laundry hanging, very realistic.
    Best wishes,
    This is good stuff,
    Jin


  • Swan song gold member
    April 25
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    from out of a parting cloud
    the full beam of a rainbow.


    • DogFish silver member
      April 25
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      thank you for replying to this excellent haiku and helping to get this contest off the ground!
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