i. hands
Legato fingers
grace pale keys,
gentle...
and onyx tones belong
in the harmony.
Dark bruises
of spilled ink
coat the moonlit palms
like raindrops,
as fingertips coax
legendary tales
from pen and piano
alike.
Spindly shadows
spread across pages
of purest snow,
as ebony meets
ivory
in melody,
and there is balance
beneath
these
hands.
ii. eyes
A forest hides
behind
flickering lashes—
green and brown merge
and circle
around the silhouette
of a thought.
Too quickly, clouds cover
the quiet wood
at signs of
suffering.
Yet, when lightning strikes
among the trees,
fires flare
all too easily.
True, after the flames
always comes relief
as crystal liquid wells
and spills over
the dam,
flooding the stillness—
dewdrops on the surface
of verdant
eyes.
iii. breath
The drumming
(staccato
within)
never ceases—
reminding crimson rivers
to flow,
and gently stirring
the breeze.
Smooth skin rises
and falls
over the valleys,
with each zephyr
lifting
deep-rooted mountains,
peacefully.
Even after exertion,
the beat remains
a steady pulse—
in, out,
up, down,
and the soft wind
is even...
but somehow,
just hearing the
low voice of
the one
can send the drum
into a frenzied rush,
forcing the air
into a sharp gasp—
until it slows
and there is a sweetness
in the new draft of
breath.
iv. lips
Simple.
Two crescent-moon
curves, dyed with
young rose petals...
strange, how they part
to whisper
the sacred syllables
of the name;
how they tingle
at the sight
of the one.
Innocence
(presumably),
yet a deep longing to brush
against another pair
of petals;
to feel the warmth
of more than just sunlight...
Awaiting a chance
to taste the music,
there is such power
in delicate,
dream-scented
lips.
v. within
There is a calm;
a still pond;
a silent sunrise
inside,
where nothing hurries
(impetuous impulses
put to rest)
and thoughts run clear
as diamond springs.
In blue moons
and purple skies,
however,
tremors spread.
Aspen leaves quiver
as the silence falls
away, leaving
a shattered mirror
where the water rested.
You.
Reverberations spread—
a pressure gently builds.
Dewdrops grace the hands,
as the eyes seek a face...
and as the breath quickens,
lips begin to tingle.
Exhilaration...
for a time
all too brief.
Trembling hands show
ink stains
once more, as the hidden forest sleeps
in eyes. Unsteady breath slows,
and lips resign to
another infinite wait…
but inside,
the quiet is broken.
Behind the mended mirror
and silent sunrise,
there is a new dream
within.
Author notes
username: catauthor
Thank you all so very, very much.
A contest entry
- Teen Idol 7: Round 11 [Top 3 - Finals] Part 5/5 by Tangled Angle.
650 points, ended May 2, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is your best poem out of the entire contest so far. Original, well thought out & flat out brilliant.


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Nice, very very original. It's sort of painting a story and you go through phases one by one. I also love the repetitions of the parts INSIDE the poem as well as in part headers. the ending was so you, a lighter note of hope.
Clappies X infinity

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Thanks, Afsand! I'm so glad that you think the italic repetition worked--I was a little worried about that.
Good luck...final round...eep!
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