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Blended  shades of black and white
Make gray
And the sweet lilac blooms
Emerge with the sun
Like the passion and love we feel.

When the spring comes,
Nothing matters, but how  your heart aches for me
And the way mine longs for you.

I close my eyes and feel
That forbidden kiss
Upon my lips,
Passion, so pure and true reeling me in
And unmistakable love
Holding us  close to each other.

In our forever love,
A love, that can never die
That one kiss...
Means everything.
Just one kiss promises
Forever a love that will remain
Even if forbidden.

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This is the first poem i've written in a while. Theres a lot of meaning behind it for me...and i want to know what you think.

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This is the first poem i've written in a while, hows the flow?

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  • omg-its-sara
    April 26, 2008

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    This is good! My favorite lines were- "And the sweet lilac blooms Emerge with the sun Like the passion and love we feel." Great words! Thanks fro entering my contest :)


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 25, 2008

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    Beautiful, I'm left nearly speechless by the emotion flowing from thsi work. Your word choice is completely dead on. Kudos.