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Charade



Crimson the taint of my heart
Black is the depth of thy soul
Blood, the medium of our unity
In its shade our love shall unfold
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Our violent passions raging
Trying so hard to resist
Fallen at last, to be victims
To that bloodstained final kiss
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That binds us, a slave to the murder
Addicted, though inside we die
How many must die, how much further
Must we play this charade you and I?
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Pretending that life is worth living
When each night we steal life away
And the only thing, that this night is bringing
Is fear to our ignorant prey...

Author notes


A myth trying to expose its true nature
Trying to remove the romantic notions surruonding it
But was the attempt successful?
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  • Redrusty66
    May 21

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    Great work. The imagery and metaphores were spot on. You brought across the emotions with artistry. Thanks for the great read.