Pink
Roses
Beautiful
Prickly
Pink
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Okay, so I wrote this in second grade. Not much of a poem but it's the first I remember writing =)
A contest entry
- Share Your First Poem by Judith Chandler.
525 points, ended April 26, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ha. cute. if you analyze it woth psychobabble you can delve into how incredibly deep it in in describing roses and how they're beautiful but vicious at the same time or something, but looking at it fron the perspective of a seven year old is nicer. a rose is a rose. By any other name would smell as sweet.
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haha although my knowledge is limited =D i got the quote in there! and thanks for analysing haha it felt kind of weird posting this on allpoetry
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I love it. So simple yet perfect and quite good for second grade.
Thank you for submitting it to my contest.
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