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Panic Case

 

 

 

 

Cursed by your eyes, my body

like splintered fractions of

whatever you call memories -

those other melancholy smiles

that abused what we call

peace

 

Maybe, through these monochromatic

silences, we can find the answers

we're looking for, but

only if you strive towards my perfection ~

 

no, I will not have you

destroy these precious tears

For they are all I have left

in keepsake from your touch

 

Dropping, my knees ache.. swollen

Things are going blurry and

my conscious is screaming for repentance

My emotions like a hurricane,

jarred by your brilliance

Stealing away the moments

like liquid gold...

taking me into oblivion

Author notes

For Steph's contest I did not get the chance to enter! BUT SHE'S MY SIS SO I'MA GONNA WRITE! (lol)

Option:

1- so i had a panic attack today, what i want from you guys is something to release the stress, built up angry and hurt. just try to help me out.

A contest entry

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Comments


  • daviscth silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    The third stanza really stands out and makes the whole poem come alive. I really enjoyed reading this. It's great.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    yummy, i already commented


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    it's scrumptous


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    aww wow, this is awesome *hugs*
    i abs. love it...if i reopen my contest will you put it in it?