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A Packet of Seeds, shovel and rake.



Congrats!
You have achieved your new Life decree.
Be kind to yourself,
as you learn to reap comfortably,
in surrender's bountiful gardens of sobriety's relief.

A humble packet of seeds is my offering.
Strength, hope and love, and exciting,
adventure’s that await.
Boldly rebuild the life deserving of you.

Oh yes, their will be days,
When the sweat seems too much to take.
I assure you, every new seedling you weed,
Will thank you dearly with abundant rewards.

A higher power will strengthen your resolve.
With the work of a step-by-step shovel and rake.
These will assist you to dig up those worrisome rocks,
that daily appear to grind down your heart.

I too…..went to the gardens of sober life,
On a moonlit night to hear what the stars,
had to piercingly whisper and say.
Filling my heart with focus and determined thoughts.

Some days were sunshine and many were rain.
Hesitantly, through it all I did learn,
how to use the tools of cope.
I raked carefully and planted deep,
my new founds seed of faith.

Others did come to observe my new lot.
Well meaning advice, though they really knew not,
How my back ached feeling a touch lost.
It was then a bold and kind inner voice
burst forth.

My first crop and tender friend,myself,
The second was the pain.
Third was forgiveness,
Fourth was compassion,
and learned joy once regained.

High Five Girlfriend,
You are not alone,
Their are many in these gardens,
toiling hard Successfully!

Powerful and Freed.



Struggle and Reap the LIFE you DESERVE!
Kindly,
Ears2hearyou
Kathleen/Seattle

























Author notes

contest prompt; the love of one sister to another in
the gardens of recovery.

Here is a link to prove to you, that you do not
recover alone:
click on this link it will take you direct:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45y3gX2szKg

group is : Kutless You are my strong tower!
Hope you still like music?

pictures is talented artistry of glittergraphics above,
and paid membership to dreamstime.com for picture below.

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Comments


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 22, 2008
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    Good job with the extended metaphor.


  • walkinthereign
    May 14, 2008

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    I love the symbolism

    Excellent Job! This poem is beautiful. I was trying to pick out a stanza or a few lines that I liked the best but all of them were so beautiful I couldn't narrow it down. I also love the pictures. The whole piece is a work of art!


  • Asylaarix
    April 29, 2008

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    First of all ... I want to thank you for that beautiful link to such a beautiful song. It fits our situation so well. I watched and just HAD to comment on it ... I appreciate that very very much and will be showing that video to her as well ... I am very pleased that you have entered this contest and must show you much respect. Thank you for your entry and good luck to you in the contest ...

    Chantelle