Heart- Beating.
Soul- Releasing.
Breathing- Steady.
Save me..
Blow me away.
Call my name.
Breathe easy- In and out.
Lift your wings- Fly away.
Let it out.
A contest entry
- Save me from Myself by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended April 26, 2008, 5 entries
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wow.... though it is short, i love this poem1 seriously. i can relate to it. u want someone to call my name, to save me, and i wish that i could breathe easy... wow... this is amazing... seriously. keep it up!
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i LOVE LOVE LOVE this - its got such a heavy rythmn behind it, almost like the way your heart beats when you are preparing to do something scary.
THis is just incredible.
Hannah
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geeze woman
I wish I could write something like this
it's the shit
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short and sweet. i like this a lot!
-B
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I like the imagery in this poem. It's short and sweet, very beautiful. Great job!
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This is great! It kinda reminds me of a short song or... like, one that girls sing when they do double dutch or... yeah. This is really good!
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Great imagery in this piece
good luck.
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This is great darling I hope that you do well with it in the contest best wishes and much love always
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AWSOME XD
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nice write,
thanks for entering
i really like the ending, pleasant and all
thanks again and good luck
take care
stephanie
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