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Exquisite

It's in every drop of dew,
Each kiss of the sun.
Imparting endlessly in the ocean waves,
The sun rises and sun sets equally.
Birds flying every where,
Engorging itself upon the
sandy shores of an exotic beach.
Winding it's way inside a lovers embrace,
No where and else where at the same time.
You can literally find exquisitness
absolutely every where!

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  • Kelli Marie
    April 25, 2008

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    This is a very nice write. Well done. One thing. Emparting should be Imparting. Other than that..good. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli