Her hair bleeds rainbow colors
Captivating fluorescent hues
She's vibrant and alive
painting the world with whoever she chooses
But as time flutters by
Beauty begins to cry
Melting hope and youth
into a puddle
of orange and blue
Author notes
credit pic**http://dangerdog.deviantart.com/art/Today-s-Youth-41760201
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Comments
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An nice take on the given picture prompt, I suppose.
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I liked that. It was pretty. Good luck on the contest!
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I love this poem because it goes so well with the picture. The imagery is amazing. ^_^ My favourite lines are:
"She's vibrant and alive
painting the world with whoever she chooses"
And:
"Beauty begins to cry
Melting hope and youth
into a puddle
of orange and blue"
I also liked how you said, "as time flutters by". Something about that is just... beautiful to me.
Wonderful write!
-Lily♥
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Wow...thanx for the nice comment you left. I like how you pointed out specific lines... thanx for the clappies!
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a good poem, the first verse made me think of my own youth with coloured hair, i used to dye it a lot being a punk rocker
and the second: ah time sighs, we are moved along the course of years sorry i am a little distracted with the cartoon family guy on tv lol it keeps making me laugh
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AHHH!!! lol it's so pretty. I love it!!
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i love it. the way you captured the rainbow in someones soul is wonderful. i also like how its not all just happy but there is a downside. great job
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Thanx so much for the trophy...First place..Im excited
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Thank you..
i have a question..do you want me to post the picture up with the poem? and if so how do i do that? -
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you can if you want too but it is not required. i dont know how to as well
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your picture is http://dangerdog.deviantart.com/art/Today-s-Youth-41760201 and your title is Bleeding Rainbows
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