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Lorelai

With eyes so fair yet shadowed,

Singing hopefully

She sits upon her rocky ledge

Overlooking the sea


Waiting for him to come

tonight, hell take her away,

waiting, always waiting

The years go by and she remains

She sighs and sings a beautiful song

with a haunting melody

Eyes never moving, her gaze fixed upon

That beautiful, torrid sea

every night, she sits and waits,

and sighs so mournfully

the years go on, but does she age

On her ledge that crumbled to the sea?

The clouds they part for the moonlight to show

A stranger coming through the leaves

He stops and stares, embracing a sight

which only he can see.


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