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Fuzzy Muse

Behold Fuzzy, the hamster poet!
Cheeks all full of clichéd muse.
Here for you by invitation,
Rodents are, I hope, within the rules.

Litta's home for retired felines,
The venue for this odd event.
With gleaming eyes he takes platform,
On said cats his wrath to vent!

Small and swift is little Fuzzy,
Both in his words and on his feet.
As the hearers fail to catch him,
Many now their makers meet.

Poor old moggies, what a show!
Revenge was sweet poetic flow.
So here our cute and tiny friend,
Did his vendetta finally end.

Author notes

This was fun to write. It aint perfect but hey, its original

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  • Jason Smith
    December 4, 2008

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    Interesting

    Quite an unusual poem that you have written. Its strange in its own sense and yet I still wouldn't change a single thing about it if I had the power to. It definatly is a unique poem. This is a very good write


  • lost190
    November 11, 2008

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    Funny I'll give it that

    hey I never thought that I would read a poem about A hamster but I guess I did wierd. but all in all good and funny. Thanks I needed the laugh

  • Cloudwatcher
    November 2, 2008

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    Something that stood out for me, a poetic hamster on a vendetta of words, and I had to come in and give it a read. Very glad I did. Makes me full of smiles.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 5, 2008
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    Funny, fun, definitely original, unique write.


  • SignifyingNothing
    July 7, 2008

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    Gotta give you major points for originality. I love your turn of phrase. You have real talent for finding just the right words. It did lose me a bit though...I'm taking it that you wrote this for the contest- now that I'm reading that the contest was for revenge, I get it more. It's good sometimes to take 'revenge' by writing. Ah, in high school I wrote a story where a girl poisons her backstabbing classmates. :-) But your humorous treatment of the theme really makes this terrific. I love this poem.


    • Dreamana
      July 7, 2008
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      TY, it was fun to write. My odd humour kicked in well and truly with this one.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    Rotflmao this is great it made me smile thank you for sharing this with me and yes this was a great contest she does do alot of fun contest much love always


  • Melodies
    April 28, 2008

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    Oh, how precious and cute is this poem! A darling write with fun packed into the lines all the way through!

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