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Visiting

 

She never would have thought

that with each coming year

To celebrate their marriage

she would be coming here 

 

She'd made a solemn vow

she will forever keep

He is her one and only

even in eternal sleep

 

Longing for the day, to again be by his side.

To look into his eyes, in honor and with pride. 

 

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Photo by Melanie Masuth aka Vampirella87 at www.deviantART.com

Picture Link: http://vampirella87.deviantart.com/art/Guardian-of-his-Cold-Grave-69699571

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 10, 2008

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    Gorgeous

    The power of love is something rarely heard but you have expressed it so effortlessly here I am just mesmerized

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    Excellent

    This is is a great write that made me
    Deep emotions flow from your words.
    Brilliant flow and rhyme as well.
    Marvelous take on the picture prompt

    Wish you the best in the contest

    Much love;f
    Many blessings
    David


  • dustookie2
    April 26, 2008

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    Hun this is just such a brilliant take on the prompt...so sad .. yet there is such beauty in knowing that your heart is loved so much and to be entwined eternally forever with the one who holds your heart is true love. Beautifully penned the lines just flow from the magic of your pen. Excellent take on the prompt. A pleasure to read thank you...good luck in the contest.


  • Desire gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    Aaaaaaaw Danggggggg!!

    Now You got me crying like a baby
    Powerful piece You have penned and what images also emotions

    -sniffle-
    Loved Your take on the prompt and the rhyme too!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • DarkHunter
    April 25, 2008

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    A beautifully sad poem showing that true love never dies. You have done an awesome job with the picture prompt. Best of luck in the contest.

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