faeries in the moonlight
flying to and fro
the warm wind
everywhere they go
the flutter of their wings
the wave of the grass
their crystalline eyes
alive with the dance
the rhythmic beat
of the water sprites
and the singing voice
of the sirens, oh so nice
the sky seems to breath
the nature seems to sigh
the unicorns create rainbows
reflecting off the starry sky
the faeries, oh so graceful
give the universe peace
so look for the moon
way up above
and the beautiful faeries
will caress you with ease
A contest entry
- Dance of the Wild Faeries by Kari.
300 points, ended April 30, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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525 points, ended May 19, 2008, 79 entries
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600 points, ended June 13, 2008, 73 entries
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1000 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
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faeries give some peace, what about you?
Comments
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I Like this poem it is very good, but I have to say that it is a little to little kid like for me though...but think you for entering it is a very good write...
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Cool. I like the flow and imagery. I would have never thought to write about faeries. But now I'm inspired! Stellar write! Thanks for entering and good luck!
+ Jackie -
cool
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Aw, this is really pretty. Thanks for your entry!
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A lovely write. Enchanting and imaginative. A pleasing shape to your poem. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice rhyme. Vivid descriptives. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. A much enjoyed read. Best wishes in the contest.
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What a beautiful poem! So light and carefree! Good luck in the contest.
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