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She





She thinks
in words she will find
what is lacking
in her heart
rather than reading
the poetry
that is already there
















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  • Desire gold member
    April 27, 2008
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    Oh My Word!!

    Wow!! This is one Powerful piece You have penned John and I'm Happy to see Your quill dancing
    My jaw dropped while reading this~
    Brilliant!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Mari Goes
    April 27, 2008
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    In and out of her heart...
    Love this short poem!


  • smiley
    April 25, 2008
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    wow

    this was pretty intense...

    Yvonne


  • ArtFullyMe silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    wonderfully done..


  • untouched pages
    April 25, 2008

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    I feel like you were speaking just to me!!! I love this write!! Its my new favorite!! This is so simple, I usualy find that short poems miss things they arint whole but today I take that back... Wonderful write!!
    ~*Cristy*~


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 25, 2008
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    woooow!!!!great

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