The cows in Europe are dying
And as they stand there dying in the rain, they wonder,
Why is Africa not sending any aid? They have loads of aids don’t they?
The cows are all confused, and humans are so smart.
So who can teach our dairy friends, to look not with their brains and eyes and ears and skin and bones and synapses and electrical impulses shooting through their bodies, but also....
with their harts?
In a list
A contest entry
- Smile even if your breath stinks! by Melvina.
450 points, ended May 2, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was an interesting twist on politics. I enjoyed it a lot for the fresh perspective! Good luck and thanks for entering my contest!
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i enjoyed the last bit but i think the third line is a bit over the top and it goes on may be if you say ' to look not with their brains and eyes and ears and skin but also....
with their harts?
great read though
luck always from
erica carnea
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Thanks, but the over the top-ness which you speak about is deliberate, so I'm not sure I want to change it. I'll give it some more thought, though and who knows what happens.
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I did enjoy this very much. Especially the third line. It's priceless. Thanks so much for sending the link.
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That's great to hear. The 4th line is my personal favourite.
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