Beyond good and evil
the enlightened conscience
rides the cosmic wind.
Shedding not one tear
for the death of a world.
Nor revels in the joy
of one born anew.
For both are needed
in equal flowing shares
to balance the Universe!
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Meditation and Momentum *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 1, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I guess you answered one of the questions I had.."can good and evil live together"
"For both are needed
in equal flowing shares
to balance the Universe!"
Very good job and good luck!!
thanks for entering
darlintlc -
Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very interesting take on the battle between good snd evil.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Balance
This piece tugged at Spirit and when I was reading...
I kept seeing a motorcycle for some reason...
and hearing word: Knight Rider...
like either Knight Rider or a Night Rider...
I noticed a period after conscience but no capital r in rides...Thought it might have been a hiccup in punctuation~
I understand what You meant
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I'm being shown the word: Vegetarian...
and seeing a sandwich cut in half...
Getting this feeling of should I or shouldn't I~~
Wonderful message from Your words for I felt a feeling of calm...seems like either music or a melody I am hearing brought Peace...
Very Interesting images I have to say...
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Beyond good and evil
the enlightened conscience.
rides the cosmic wind..
Excellent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I love shorties. I lik this one, It brings beauty and desruction into the equation. Nicely written.
Best of luck
Silenced One
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