Momentum resounds with every kiss from your lips
Burning passions form deeply within
Twirling my hair round your finger
as your breath envelopes my skin
I love you my darling
Author notes
written for the man I love
A contest entry
- magic in words by transit.
660 points, ended May 1, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow!
just wow.wow.wow. This is an amzing poem!
I could feel the love and passion as it entwined throughout the poem. 
aaww this is what true love is made of.
I wish I could feel this way when I am older and find my Prince Charming.
There was beautiful imagery too. Good luck!
love,
transit
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Beautiful just beautiful xxxxxxx
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This is so good! I like it a lot. Your man is a luck guy. I can never write about positive things so it's always nice to read about them...Great write!
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