These last few
months
We’ve faced the struggles
of a
Long – distance
relationship.
Still,
Here we are.
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Today;
Our son clutched my hand,
walking me home
from college…
(Barely 6 years old)
he walked most of the way,
Before I lifted him up,
and carried him home...
Alert and smiling,
He pointed out the ducks
Swimming in the brook;
and asked where
“daddy’s fishes gone?”
& I told him,
’the sky’s been crying
too much’.
He asked how we could help,
and I said to listen.
(listen to the rain,
to mother earth,
to father sky)
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Let the rain
Pour down
And cleanse us,
a married couple,
of this
h.u.r.d.l.e.
*(listen to the spirit within)*
And we’ll open our arms,
As two lovers should,
and spin,
dancing together,
falling
ever deeper
in love.
<3
Author notes
Written 16th January 2008. For Phil. <3
Personal, but I want to improve it; so be honest.
Comments
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i like the brackets. They make it kinda mature, i dunno why. also i like the way it goes to a point at the end. points are cool.
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