What's wrong with my hair
atleast it's all there
It moves when I play
not stiff with spray
It was not my fault
that hair pin you bought
I put it in the socket
the sparks flew like a rocket
Now my hair is well done
and it shines like the sun
I'm still your little boy
your bundle of joy
I learned my lesson Mommy
will teach it to little Tommy
Cause he's my best bro
his hair will never glow
Author notes
I shaved my hair off 2yrs ago and got more compliments than I ever did! It was great,the freedom it gave me.
A contest entry
- Give Me a Head of Hair by iamlost.
600 points, ended May 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very cute comic relief. Children are a constant source of inspiration. Oh, I'm sorry I meant aggravation.
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You got that right!
Thanks for the comment
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This is a fascinating poem and so funny, I really like it because I have never read anything like it before, the poem is unique. It is also liberating and great fun to read.
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So glad u enjoyed it!
I did have a pic. that went with it but couldn't get it to show!
Thanks again for the applause too!
Sorry I missed u on chat!
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hair today gone tomorrow lol i keep my hair short these days but i used to be more hippy like, a good fun poem here
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"It moves when I play
not stiff with spray"
I like these lines, as well as the carefree tone of the entire poem. I agree, I love the freedom of being shaved, it takes like no time to get read in the morning! I like this poem, very nice, thanks for the entry!
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