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Before,
        I was a wrangled victim
            believing pain
                  as proof of life

Now
    I welcome calm in silence
        that screams joy
          with much less strife.

How
    could we explain the fuss?
        kids have left
          and now it's us.

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  • BobbieA
    April 25

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    I could cry.

    I feel your pain, (as Bill Clinton once said) I felt this once when all were gone, but they came back! Ha Good poem Di

    • CookieZeal silver member
      April 25
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      CLINTON? You kidding? Why, Bobbie, that's nearly insane. Next thing you'll quote is his public denial about Lewinski. LOL