I can feel a breeze
in places i shouldn't
the wind flies through
my shattered pieces
it haunts me in the sunlight
that there is no ray of hope
Author notes
i chose this because i am a broken person who cant be fixed
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 25, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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I always love reading shorter poems because they always seem to hold so much meaning in the few words they contain. I definately felt it in this poem, thanks for entering.
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i love it! sad, and short but powerfull.
good luck in my contest!
♥ MMGerard323 -
Very nice! So many meanings float within this. I'm always amazed at how you can put such meaning in so few words... Well done!
Ken
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Very strong and very sad....nicely written in heartfelt meaning in so few words...well done...thank you for sharing!
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