You came into my life by surprise,
I give you truth with no touch of lies.
I prayed for someone and I know its you,
You made my prayers effective and so true.
So greatful knowing someone like you,
You make a difference and its you.
What am I suppose to say?
Just to make you calm and stay.
My mind unwinds when I think of you,
And my heart beats began to sing with you.
I gave you my everything just only for you,
You are seeing the real me and exclusively for you.
My tears fall to think that you may leave,
That's why I am willing to give.
I'll take the risk for you I will,
Coz I know this has a purpose in His will.
I heart you that's all I can feel,
I'll wait for you and love you still.
The feelings so lonely about this,
I'll smile for you with closed fist.
To love you is a wonderful act,
I'm always here at your back.
Waiting and longing for your touch,
Until you are ready to love without ouch.
Your voice makes me so secured,
And your smile makes me so assured.
How I wish I am near you,
To love and care full sweetness for you.
The longing of your warm hug to make me calm,
And touching you so nice with soft palm.
I don't find you are anybody so ordinary,
Coz my days loving you is extraordinary.
I am willing to wait till you are okay,
And achieve your love with a brighter day.
When the day comes that you are ready,
Then that's the time we'll go-steady.
I love you and that's all I can say,
And my love flourishes for you everyday.
When you want to deal with my love then come,
I can't wait and so excited that day will come.
A contest entry
- Love Me For Who I Am. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Holdin' You Holds Me Together by FollowingFate.
450 points, ended May 20, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love/Invisibility by phynix.
390 points, ended June 9, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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so cute. this is just a very sweet write and you can't help but smile as you read it. good job.
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I loved your poem. At first I saw how long it was and I was like...
I am NOT reading that, but then I saw that it rhymed. Rhyme is always easier to read. Anyways...I loved this poem, and it was the first one that I've read that was actually kinda what I'm looking for. ... Holdin' You Holds Me Together is about a person being lost without that one person, and falling apart without the love and embrace of that one person. You are the only one so far that conveyed that in your piece, and I loved it. Great job and Good luck
~jess
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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