Yin and Yang,
Feather and Stone,
Heart beats fast... then stops.
Relax.
Cool wind blows,
Feathers tickle your nose.
Sun warms stone,
In time warming your soul.
Opposites for the same cause.
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What an inspirational pic prompt... A_Series_of_Meditation_4_ by_ Otiose
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Welcome Back!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Welcome!!
Beautiful Your piece qualifies and elated to see You backBest wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Frist of all congratulations on your H.M.
this was a great Meditation and Momentum,
with some profound words for thought.
Thanks for sharing,
Warm Thoughts.
Frozentearz -
This is great much love
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: opposites
This piece tugged at Spirit and when I was reading...
I wanted to chuckle a bit because I am hearing a joke
like it feels when You were writing this...
something humorous happened either right before...
and I am being shown a commercial...
Now~~ I am seeing the Uni-brow commercial which has
me cracking up...but hearing: funny
Ok..now I keep hearing the word: fart...
and getting You have a Marvelous sense of humor
This may or may not make sense ...(Boy I'm using a lot
of sense here eh)
but a reference to tongue~ it feels like speaking in tongue~
more than one language...
hearing reference to You can apply Your Art to everyday
Life...
Very Amusing images I must say
...
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Cool wind blows,
Feathers tickle your nose.
Sun warms stone, .
Excellent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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The cleasning of thoughts from a chaotic mind all the images that pass through our brain to take it to a state of complete calm....the pace of daily grind to the stillness of meditation. Brilliant take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
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