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Hair

I wanna grow my hair
way down to there
Steamin, gleemin, fuzzy, wuzzy,furry
Yards of wonderful hair
So much more to spare

Straight, maybe very thick
Some say like Cousin It
Long skanky hair
there, baby, here
Somewhere I dont care

Greazy hair
Smelly and Welly
Hansome fella
shake it
break it
O wonderful Hair

Long , yeah far too long
Dont cut it me to strong
Spin my song
Where I belong
Shakin my head and singin

Long beautiful hair

HEy man where's da revolution
Gotta do my ablutions
I dont care
Long as I can grow with my
Hair
Grow it...Blow it ...Show it

HAIR Yeah
Aint it grand
Hair
Longest in da land
Hair

A contest entry

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  • iamlost gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    I like this, it has a very hippie kind of tone to it, much like the song I took the title of the contest from. I like the formatting and rhyme/rhythm scheme, it works very well. Thanks for this entry!