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strawberry cream

down and out
bored as hell
i make me a special ingredients
for the perfect recipe
how about i mix. . .
chocolate syrup, cookies and cream
rocky road, reeses pieces, hershey's,
snickers, twixes, milky ways
white chocolate, vanilla drops,
and the final touch. . .  strawberry cream

Author notes

ichigosama. option 2 or 3.

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  • Griswold silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    I think that concoction would make you bounce off the walls. Thanks for entering and best of luck...Scott


  • PatheticKt
    August 22, 2008

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    "Delicious" short write you got here; it's a nice poem
    Some of the i's should be capitalized and there's no need for 'a' before special ingredients ^^'
    As I typed already, this is a nice poem, indeed ~


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    June 23, 2008

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    This sounds like a wonderful concotion for one heck of a tootheache. This made me laugh though. thanks.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    Death by Candy the only way to go this is a yummy poem goodlukc in the contest best wishes and much luck


  • Samcat
    April 25, 2008

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    mmm sounds scrummy! I might have to try it when i get better! Thank you! You made me smile!

    x

    • ichigosama
      April 25, 2008
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      bullet-to-my brain-x

      you're welcome. i need some new ideas for my poem. any ideas or suggestion would be great?

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