Daerest friend oh how I miss you today
for you helped me mend all the hearts that dismayed
with open arms you reached out wide
with an open that could abide
you touched my soul and you made whole
All the times were amazing with you
you brought into my life a friendship so true
I was so blind but you made me see
all the beauty inside of me
Kindest friend you were so dear to my heart
you straightened the bend on this ever lonely path
with pain and misery in mind
you reached out and you helped me find
you set me free
you made me believe
All the times were amazing with you
you brought into my life a friendship so true
I was so blind but you made me see
all the beauty inside of me
Author notes
the song reminded me of a friend, so i decided to add the lyrics of a song i wrote for one of my closest friends that i have lost.... please let me know what you think...
A contest entry
- Prompt...........Angelflower &buffsab99 by Angelflower.
950 points, ended May 3, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Funeral For A Friend by movedon.
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please read and respond...
Comments
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Danielle always thought of me as an angel. If I ever put myself down, or said, "i hate my hair" or "omg i hate my feet" She tilted her head to the side and said, "Myles, sweetie, your mirror is broken because all I see is an angel." she was MY angel. Thank you for entering!!
Mylee -
This was such a beautiful write!! I really enjoyed this... You did a great job with the prompt! best of luck!!..
Angel
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Excellent
Beautiful take on the prompt. Your friend would be proud of this special tribute to him. Best of luck in the contest
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