She waits with single red rose,
for death to take her away,
as it took her lover,
upon a cold winter day.
She sheds no tears of sadness,
with him she will be soon,
both of them in each others,
arms as they look upon the moon.
so there she waits patiently, for the lord choose her to take,
no longer will she feel this pain, her heart will no longer break.
A contest entry
- Melanie Masuth Picture Inspired #6 by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended May 10, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Dear Poet,
Thank you for your submission "She Waits." However, somehow
your poem does not been show up on my page; You'll need to click on my contest:"Fore-play"
This is a Prompt and options contest.
Prewrites are allowed but you must read the rules and follow them.
All of them. Choose an option, put it and the option number in author's notes
print out your username like this: l i q u i d m i n d, with a space between letters
Once you've complied, im with title of your entry and i'll be happy
to read it., if you have questions, just ask and i'll be pleased to help.
till then
best wishes
and stay
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wow i dont think ive read nything by you like this befor it is sad yet beutiful and hopeful all at once, a real emotive lucky bag
thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
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wow this is a really sad, yet, uplifting piece. i loved the second stanza...really great choice of words and flow.
great write
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Beautiful. The first stanza is great. So deep and moving...
~lae
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Touching
The pain, love and loss is so flawlessly expressed in this write.
Charming and strong
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Wow, the love you show in this is truly everlasting. Well written, short and sweet, and the imagery is beautiful. i love the use of teh red rose especially.
(and, not sure if you remember from quite awhile ago - I used to be red satan)
Its good to be able to read your work again!
Much love,
Kas
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You have painted the picture well in your words as you guide us through your work The lines capture all the emotion within your words as they flow smoothly into my mind i am the wacther as this unfolds. Very nicely penned. Great take on the prompt. Good luck in this contest.
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loved the feeling and the everlasting love in this poem. You expressed many emotions but above all love, and thats how it should be. great write buddy, hope all is well.
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Wow. . .
This is really pretty,
I really lke this one,
I am finding it hard to belive that you poured so much emotion into such a short poem,
I like it. . .Its Awwesum,
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Damn this poem is amazing! The perfect picture your words draw, it is fantastic. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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