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Eternitys pain

Missing image
A rose each year
to remember her love.
This virginal angel
waiting for her groom,
dead all these years
and still she waits.
Only carrion for company.
The memories of death
playing games in her mind.
insanity creates room for...
                                  ...eternitys pain.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    Congrats on the gold!!

    Awesome poem, not sure how I missed this! True love never dies, beautifully portrayed. Congrats on a much deserved gold


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 10, 2008

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    Beautifully tragic

    I adore your take on the picture, the virgin bride waiting years for her partner long since gone.
    Enchanting


    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Maeve in the Night
    April 28, 2008

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    Beautifully written.. Sadness in every word.. You have really brought this picture to life.. Best of luck to you Ash..

    Maeve


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Wow.. love the seeping darkness and pain in this... last two lines are really gripping!

    Excellent for that pic!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    such a sad, yet beautiful poem. true love lasts even beyong death. Nothing can break that bond, nothing in life and surely not in death either. I love your take on the prompt. outstanding poem

    good luck my love in the contest

    Akasha

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