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Mind Doctor

Take me to a doctor,
My mind is not my own.
Take me to a doctor,
My sanity has flown.

Take me to a doctor,
So I can sleep at night.
Take me to a doctor,
He can make me right.

Take me to a doctor,
And knock upon his door,
Take me to a doctor,
I want the talking cure.

Take me to a doctor,
Lacan, Jung or Freud.
Take me to a doctor,
I need a caring guide.

Take me to a doctor,
Madness I have known,
Take me to a doctor,
My mind is not my own.

Author notes

"Take me to a doctor" - I repeatedly used this line in the poem in order to portray a sense of the person in question having an obsessional disorder.

"Lacan" - Jacques Lacan; a French psychoanalist.

"Jung" - Carl Jung; a Swiss pschologist.

"Freud" - Sigmund Freud; a German psychologist and 'Father of Psychoanalysis'

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  • missrenee
    June 29, 2008

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    hmm

    i liked it, it reminded me of this one time when i had a phsycotic breakdown and i had to go to the hospital.. it was really good ;]