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Mettle

She said “peddle to the mettle”
wicking screens with soap;

“ Let us chap your lips with trinkets
  as knickers twist their fur in thrusts -
  I’ll race you past that gnarly tree
  where we’ll play lemon squash;
 
  Swear to pigeon me an abacus
  and buy a chamber by the vine -
  film pennants lance our ripened grapes
  ‘til this lass makes you mine. ”















Author notes

6 words used in altered form: Thrust(s), pennant(s), screen(s), wick(ing), trinket(s), grape(s)

14 words used as stated: fur, knickers, squash, soap, pigeon, gnarly, chap, abacus, lass, lance, swear, chamber, mettle, film

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  • Gypsie Ink
    April 28, 2008

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    Wow

    I love the creativity in the use and the nuttiness of the piece....how adorable!

    Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest.