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Antique Rug

Mother kept a spotless home
a glasshouse of illusion;
she wonders why I rarely sweep the floor.




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unswept floors

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  • chasingtheday gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    me and you alike lol the floor's a dust filled magical place where ash and bits of baccy roll about, a good poem.


  • peridotPixi
    April 25, 2008

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    this is a great take on the promt you have used in this pice, its so deep and true, that it says a lot in a few words along with the nice flow, good luck in the contest, and keep writing, -Amy


    • eoz
      April 26, 2008
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      thank you for your comment and encouragement!
      zoe