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Maybe you're going insane*
*The pain begins to worsen
No hospitable people around*
*God shall smite you
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You temperature strikes one-hundred*
*The mind begins to swell
Overcoming the cause is futile*
*The effect is deadly
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The ground seems to be moving*
*The world collapses to your knees
Imploring you to die with everyone else*
*Die, just die
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All our dreams and wishes*
*We should hold for safe keeping
All the ashes have been remade*
*Into a perfect memory
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Shut those struggling eyes*
*The eyes of mercy glare towards us
Now you don't feel the pain anymore*
*The mark has left you
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Author notes
Option 5,6,11,14,and 18 were used.. hope I can use multiple options :3
A contest entry
- ALMOST ANYTHING GOES by VerminVomit.
303 points, ended May 5, 2008, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Enjoy.. ^^;;
Comments
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the mark! being a sufferer of migraine I know what your sayin! though i also know this is not just about a headache but when the black beast of mind shattering pain rears it's head sometimes you wish the mark would just leave you
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ive felt this way before...
ok the first 3 lines reminds me of me... the 4th line reminds me of my english teacher... and the last 4 stanzas remind me of me... i like the 3rd stanza the most especially the last 3 lines... ive felt this way so many times... and...yeah...
thanks for entering my contest
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