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one last time...

as surely as the sun sets

and again it rises…

 

the waves will always crash

onto the shore

over and over

 

and so my enemies

will fall

over and over

 

...one last time

In a list

A contest entry

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  • jcat gold member
    April 26

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    I love that you captured the essence of what the artist felt when he did this picture!! Your words were beautiful magic and I thank you for sharing this with me in my contest


  • Endeavor gold member
    April 26
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    Very Good


    I just read you entry

    Much said in very few words

    Lovely

    Rick


  • eltortedequeso
    April 25
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    oooh, the poem sounds epic! i like it a lot! nicely done and best of luck!

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 25

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    Excellent! That's perfect for the pic and the inspiration behind it..
    (I'm trying to write for this too but sigh...lol)

    . Rewarded 4

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