‘Jade’ed View.
Look deep into the jade-green eyes before you
come visit for a while; amuse me with what you see.
I beg,
you’ll find light in my darkest abyss
perhaps bring love
out of all this grievous pain.
Are you my guardian angel?
Here to set me free….
Come,
look deep into the jade-green eyes before you
stay forever; amuse me with what you see.
Author notes
Credit to this picture and it was an absolute inspiration
http://michaelo.deviantart.com/art/Soul-Searching-83667184
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I beg,
you’ll find light in my darkest abyss
perhaps bring love
out of all this grievous pain
An almost abstract feel to it, I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for entering it into my ever so humble little contest and good luck! -
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Thank you, my pleasure to enter
Cindy
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Great write
This makes me wish I had entered something else. I love it.
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Awww so nice thank you, but I didn't win anyway lol
Cindy
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I love how you took this to a "guardian angel" theme.....Completely captivating and I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with me in my contest
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Ohh I love what you did sis (I'm sure I commented on this.. weird).
The feeling of drawing someone to you, challening them to see what inside, beneath the surface... excellent!!
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lol, maybe you just remember it cause your in the same contest to..Who knows lol
Thanks SiS, that pic sparked so many thoughts
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lol.. no I read it! But seems some of my comments aren't coming through so I've been recommenting on people's stuff lol
The pic sure does hey!
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KEVINNNNNNNNNN
lol
Gee's that would piss me off hehehehe
The onyl thing I can suggest is staying on the page and making sure it posts..Thats what i do when im not in a shitty....hurried mood hehehehe
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haha yea I tend to do that too.. gotta hang around a bit longer.. lol... plus my damn internet keeps crashing grrrr... lol
Good luck sis of mine!
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I checked out the picture prompt. I think you have penned wonderful words to go with it. Love Juls
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Thanks Juls, Much appreciated
Cin
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wow sis this is amaazingly written with a strong take and you have captured it I could close my eyes to vision it as well. well done
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Aw Thanks Sissy
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I realy like this! There is a journey to be taken in those eyes as the enchanmt there way into the heart.
A great poem! Well done and thank-you for sharing your creative self with us
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Thanks darl, much appreciated
Cin
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