Amongst a sea of snow,
Arise many islands of stone,
A girl of looks so young,
Whose soul is eternally old.
Pining the days that have gone,
When the wind was less bittersweet,
The sun was warm on her face,
Yet those days are far away.
So she waits upon her island,
An eternal beauty, never changing.
Author notes
Shouts out to Melanie Masuth aka Vampirella87 who gave an awesome photo.
Hope this is ok for the contest i had a little difficulty sticking to no more than ten lines.
Hope you enjoy
xoxo
A contest entry
- Melanie Masuth Picture Inspired #6 by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended May 10, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful
Absolutely beautiful take on the picture, the flow and imagery just sink into my mind as I am mesmerized.
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Good write here
I like the verse a girl that looks so young
whose soul is eternally old
yet the whole poem is very good indeed
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a good piece of poetry, ah we long in life so often it seems, waiting on the wind, i have not looked at the picture, i will do so in a minute
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Thank you
You found my weakness when it comes to writing poetry.
I tend to type to fast to notice my grammer or spelling it tends to switch to autonomous controls
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