Two people are walking, hand in hand.
HER: [suddenly looking at his face] Did I ever tell you that I can talk to the moon?
HIM: [amused] No, I can't say you have.
HER: I do.
HIM: And does the moon reply?
HER: Oh, no, she doesn't hear me. But I can listen to her singing.
HIM: [slightly perplexed] Singing?
HER: [softly] To you I'll give the breath of stars,
the touch of night,
the murmur of daybreak,
and you must do nothing but be.
HIM: That's a song?
HER: Of course.
HIM: It doesn't rhyme.
HER: It doesn't have to.
[They walk in silence.]
HER: She's in love, you know.
HIM: Who?
HER: The moon, with the sea.
HIM: [drops her hand] What do you mean?
HER: She whispers to him sometimes, when it's late, and I hear her.
HIM: [silence]
HER: She tells him how much she needs him, even though you'd think it would be the other way around. It's not though, of course, because she's in love.
HIM: [stops walking] How can the moon need anything?
HER: [stops] Oh, she does. [turns to him, steps closer] He doesn't realize that he is everything to her.
HIM: But...it's the moon that really controls the tides, and the sea doesn't do anything.
HER: Yes, he does. You see, she's always there, guiding him. [places hands on his chest] Helping him remember to breathe when he's busy, and sleep when he's tired.
HIM: So why does she need him?
HER: [looks up to his eyes] If it wasn't for the sea, I don't think she'd...be.
HIM: [gently] Be what?
HER: Be anything. Be happy, or upset, or thoughtful. He's the reason that she is.
HIM: [takes her hands] And what does the sea say to that?
HER: I don't think she's really saying it for him to hear. She just has to whisper it, so that she knows. But do you know something?
HIM: What?
HER: I think that he hears it, everything that she says.
HIM: [quietly] I'm certain of it.
[scene ends as they stand, looking at each other and again holding hands]
Author notes
username: catauthor
type of work: skit/script
inspiration poem: beginning of "Moontide Abyss"
Soppy, yes. The good kind of soppy?
I was purposefully vague on location and characters. I wanted this to be fairly universal--beach, forest, suburbs, big city, what have you.
The couple can also be interpreted as a girl and a guy, two girls, or two guys--I just used a guy and girl for clarity in the script.
Um...sort of my first try at writing a skit; what do you think? I hope it's an improvement on the original poem, which, now that I look back, was pretty weak.
Thanks!
A contest entry
- Teen Idol 7: Round 11 [Top 3 - Finals] Part 4/5 by Tangled Angle.
650 points, ended May 2, 2008, 3 entries
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Comments
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I thought you did a very nice job. Very clever.

