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Needle in the hay

I saw that look,
In your eye,
The one where your about to cry.

I spent all those nights,
Wondering what would be,
Then it suddenly came clear to me.

I once was happy
Just to be,
Part of you and part of me.

Then months went by,
Then that feeling that i used to have,
The feeling where i want to die
Came back and hit me hard.

My dreams turned to nightmares,
And threatened me,
Telling me that no one cares.

But then
I found my needle
In the hay,
But it threw your life in dissaray.

Im sorry about us,
It wasn't you,
Just the things you do.

Im happy,
For a time,
But i knew you would never be mine.

I hope you can someday find,
Someone who can love the real you,
And can love you through the things you do.



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  • aj.vamp
    May 5

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    HEy, this is pretty good. I like

    Im sorry about us,
    It wasn't you,
    Just the things you do.

    It sounds like the that break up line, It's not u its me. BUt yours sounds so much better.