Must you dwell
in Ocean's depths
so stubborn?
Cast my wings asunder
and I shall pray
for gills
Author notes
i don't really know what the mechanics would be for this....freewrite?
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 25, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Ain't All Bad; Right? by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 28, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
picture is Acasca by ~liquidd-1, see contest for picture
Comments
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hahaaha this is cute...thanks for your entry
lol
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awwww nice take on the prompt I like this very much love the trading wings for gills
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beautiful poem you wrote there. nice take on the pic. hope you win!
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Very creative...I too felt the need to change to be with the one that is loved...nicely done...thank you for sharing!
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Ohhhh... like this take on the pic...
Sounds like wanting to be seen, to be loved, and willingness to do whatever it takes to be noticed by that person.. that's my take anyway lol
Love it!
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exactly what I had in mind, one's struggle to be with another, 2 beings of different worlds and elements. much thanks!
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