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Turmoil Within

I sit
pondering life,
atop the jetti rocks.
Waves crash at my feet in chaos,
much like the muddle within my own life.
I look out to the shore for peace,
but I must look within.
Amidst uproar,
I sit

Author notes

My First Rictameter.

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I thiink that you have penned a very well written rictameter. Very good for a first one.