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Wheels

It started when i was young,
So many years ago it seems,
"Spontaneous dislocation"
That's what the doctors told me.

I remember not being able to run,
Kids taunted and teased me all day,
Nothing compared to the pain i felt,
When my knee would just blow away.

Now lets go down the track a bit,
7 years or so till i'm now 19,
Just sitting on the couch and "ahh",
I grab my knee and start to scream.

"Ligaments are torn straight through,
and your bone is worn down severely to",
So a wheelchair was my life from now,
No dancing, laughing or drinking "wow".

3 months living life as a 'cripple',
My friends all abandoned me to,
Just a week after i lost my fiance,
"My life's GREAT how about you?"

Then one day i went to my doctor,
"I'm taking the wheelchair away,
You're going to suffer much pain,
I need you to walk throughout the day."

So now i don't have my wheelchair,
3 weeks of excrutiating pain,
Until i was given oxycontin 10mg,
Now i am able to walk again.

In one sweep the pain was gone,
When it shines it shines bright,
An old friend is bringing me joy,
Suddenly the world now seems right.

In not too long i'll be cut open,
There're goingto replace my knee,
After i will feel no pain for life,
After hard times we are set free.

Author notes

Ok this is a little long for what i usually write but i was trying to explain everything.
I had a whole heap of things crash in my life all at once and was left alone to deal with them because my friends seem to think that a wheelchair is contagious.

Anyway i have found that after you go through hard times you will inevitability bounce up and when the sun shines it shines bright and so trust me if you can your life will stay great and continue that way.

xoxo

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  • walkinthereign
    May 14, 2008

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    Very Honest

    This poem is truthful. It puts people in one with your pain and lets others experience what you were going through! I wish you the best of luck with your operation. You deserve to be able to not only walk but run free!